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雅思寫作： 學(xué)會(huì)這些技巧增強(qiáng)你的雅思寫作語言表現(xiàn)力！

 

一、 避免使用語意弱的 “be” 動(dòng)詞。

1 、 可以把句中的表語轉(zhuǎn)換為不同的修飾語。

例如： Weak: The trees are bare. The grass i s brown.

The l andscape seems drab.

Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab l andscape. ( 轉(zhuǎn)換為前置定語 ) Or: The l andscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. ( 轉(zhuǎn)換為并列結(jié)構(gòu)作后置 定語 )

 

2 、 將作表語用的形容詞或名詞變?yōu)樾袨閯?dòng)詞。

例如： 1) Weak: The team members are good players.

Revision: The team members play well. 2)

Weak: One worker's plan i s the elimination of tardiness.

Revision: One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.

 

3 、 在以 “here” 或 “there” 開頭的句子中， 把 “be” 動(dòng)詞后的名詞代詞變成改寫句的主語。

例如： 1) Weak: There i s no opportunity for promotion.

Revision: No opportunity for promotion exists.

2) Weak: Here are the books you ordered.

Revision: The books you ordered have arrived.

 

二、 多用語意具體的動(dòng)詞， 保持句意簡潔明了。

例如： 1 、 Poor: My supervisor went past my desk.

Better:My supervisor sauntered ( =walked slowly) past my desk.

2 、 Poor: She i s a careful shopper. Better: She compares prices and quality.

 

三、 盡量運(yùn)用主動(dòng)語態(tài)。

例如：

1 、 Weak: The organization has been supported by charity.

Better: Charity has supported the organization.

2 、 Weak: The biscuits were stacked on a plate.

Better: Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.

 

 

四、 防止使用語意冗長累贅的詞語。

例如：

1 、 Wordy: My l ittle sister has a preference for chocolate milk.

I mproved: My l i ttle sister prefers chocolate milk.

 

2 、 Wordy: We are i n receipt of your l etter and i ntend to follow your recommendations.

I mproved: We have received your l etter and i ntended to follow your recommendation.

 

3 、 Redundant: We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry l aboratory caught fire.

I mproved: We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry l aboratory caught fire.

4 、 Redundant: My sister and I bought the same, i dentical dress i n different stores.

I mproved: My sister and I bought the same dress i n different stores.

 

 

五、 杜絕濫用陳舊詞語或難懂的專業(yè)術(shù)語。

例如：

1 、 Weak: They will not agree to his proposals i n any shape or form.

I mproved: They will not agree to any of his proposals.

 

2 、 Weak: I need her financial i nput before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.

I mproved: I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.